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New page, FINALLY D: I like the colored pages when they're done, but they take FOHEVAAAAAAH!! XD Oh well, guess I put this punishment on myself. And it's not really punishment when you enjoy coloring. It's more like detail obsessive massochism (lol hope I spelled that right XD I am teh suck at spelling).
Anyways >.> next page should be a colored title page, assuming I don't fail everyone. I think I'm pretty much decided on the chapter title. So excited about getting into chapter 3 C: The eternal fight scene ends, I promise. It's time to explain my craziness XD
Thanks to everyone who reads my junk again! I hope you actually like it, though I find it hard to believe. Still got improving to do, but that's what practice is for. ESC still reads right to left because of my wierdness, by the way.
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Anyways >.> next page should be a colored title page, assuming I don't fail everyone. I think I'm pretty much decided on the chapter title. So excited about getting into chapter 3 C: The eternal fight scene ends, I promise. It's time to explain my craziness XD
Thanks to everyone who reads my junk again! I hope you actually like it, though I find it hard to believe. Still got improving to do, but that's what practice is for. ESC still reads right to left because of my wierdness, by the way.
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Vision
Originality Technique ImpactFirst off, every time i see one of your pages they get better and better, you have a gift for bringing emotion and movement into your pictures.
Vision- the concept of this page seems well thought out. you placed the right amount of emotion and image in each panel, and it isn't crowded up with word balloons
Originality- it is fairly original, the concept had been done before obviously but you put a good twist on the scene. usually in books like Naruto or Bleach the characters jump into battle if they are wounded, but you put this internal conflict in. At the same time, you show her expression changes, putting the readers at an advantage of knowing what she is thinking and at the same time looking upon the scene as if they were the bad guy standing over Ally.
Technique- like always, your art impresses me. there is so much feeling and movement placed into the pictures in your story. i can clearly see this whole page play out in my head as i read it as if it were a video. The expressions are spot on.
Impact- the progression of getting cut, realizing she is bleeding, the inner conflict of yes or no, and finally the defeated, sad look at the end flow incredibly. it is a great flowing page that draws my attention and leaves me wanting more. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="
" title=" (Big Grin)" />The only thing that seems kind of off is her little finger in the second panel.
OVERALL this picture draws my attention, is original, and has almost no flaws that i can see. I look forward to more ESC. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="
" title=" (Big Grin)" /> <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)" />